If I may make a suggestion, I think that having the snake interact with the environment might make the painting more dynamic. I think just adding his body rolling over a large piece of rubble form the temple would tie the snake into the environment and also enforce the age of the ruins. I am also not sure about the placement of the snake, it is right in the center of the piece, I think that moving it to the left a bit would help move the eye around and not make it so obvious where the snake is. I feel like we the viewer should have to do a bit more "snake hunting". Last thing I think having the hunter kneel, in a "tracker stance" might look good. Dispute my ramblings I have complete faith that the final version will be bad ass!
Also if you did it in vector it would look even better ;)
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your pictures are really awesome, you have future. great work.
keep working.
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If I may make a suggestion, I think that having the snake interact with the environment might make the painting more dynamic. I think just adding his body rolling over a large piece of rubble form the temple would tie the snake into the environment and also enforce the age of the ruins. I am also not sure about the placement of the snake, it is right in the center of the piece, I think that moving it to the left a bit would help move the eye around and not make it so obvious where the snake is. I feel like we the viewer should have to do a bit more "snake hunting". Last thing I think having the hunter kneel, in a "tracker stance" might look good. Dispute my ramblings I have complete faith that the final version will be bad ass!
Also if you did it in vector it would look even better ;)
You are ridiculous.
i love the kind of jurassic park vibe, very fun.
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